Re: Golden Star - UPDATE w/ Chapter 11: The Ride Home
Thanks for telling me I'll change them :)
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The next chapter will be extra long, I'll probally have it posted by tomarrow :)
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[Fun With Mike] Please give feedback :) Oh and tell me if there's mistakes, I downloaded a Word Processor but it's really glitchy. ~When Mike and Jessica got inside, Jessica told Mike to hang her...
View ArticleRe: Golden Star - UPDATE w/ Chapter 12: Fun With Mike
Great update. I liked Jessica making him find golf balls in the basket with dirty clothes, shoes and mouse traps. I sent you a PM regarding any mistakes I found.
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JayTee69 wrote:Great update. I liked Jessica making him find golf balls in the basket with dirty clothes, shoes and mouse traps. I sent you a PM regarding any mistakes I found.Thanks, I was trying to...
View ArticleRe: Golden Star - UPDATE w/ Chapter 13: Night Time
[Night Time] As usual I would like feedback :) Thank you Jessica led Mike upstairs towards her bedroom, which was across the hall from the bathroom, when she got an idea. She then redirected Mike,...
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Bobbing for an apple in the toilet...nice! I wonder what he'll have to do next? :-)
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JayTee69 wrote:Bobbing for an apple in the toilet...nice! I wonder what he'll have to do next? :-)Thanks, I actually have a few more really cool ideas I wanna try. :) The only problem is I'm trying to...
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